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Part 3: Drake by ~Iakos:iconIakos:



                Just as I lost the feeling of my whole body my vision refocused, but it was tinted red. I also noticed everything seemed brighter, like I could see better than I could before. However I couldn’t move anything, even my eyes. But wait what the hell? My eyes were moving, but I wasn’t doing it! I could still hear that guy screaming.

“God that guy’s annoying,” I heard a voice say, my voice!

Just what the hell is going on here!? Now I’m walking up to the thing, still can only see and hear. I saw myself kick its foot and call up to it.
“Hey lady! If you’re going to make such a ruckus, could you at least go away!?” I yelled.

The thing looked down at me with an annoyed face. It responded to ‘my’ question by kicking me a good 10 yards away. Glad I didn’t feel that. It looked satisfied and turned her attention back to the poor man with a smile.

“Well now you’ve done it,” I heard ‘me’ say just before I stepped into the shade of a tree, night hadn’t completely fallen yet.

I heard a slight chuckle before I noticed I seemed to be sinking into the ground! When my eyes went under everything went black for a moment, then I ‘resurfaced’ on the branch of a tree facing opposite the sun above the creature about 60 yards up. Did ‘I’ just travel from one shadow to another!? I’d find this awesome if it wasn’t for the threat of death and lack of any control over what I was doing. I staggered a bit on the branch.

“Damn, haven’t gotten used to this host yet, I’m tired as hell,” I heard a voice inside my head say.

“Wait, who or what the hell are you?” I thought in an attempt to communicate.

“Oh yeah, forgot you could ‘speak’ to me. Anyway watch and be quiet.”

‘I’ moved my right hand up so I could see it, rotated it as if to get a good look then straitened my fingers and thumb so that they were all pointing away from my arm. Then something freaky happened, my upper arm morphed into what appeared to be a blade! As soon as it was done ‘I’ jumped off the branch and grabbed onto some of the things hair with my left hand and used it to swing around over the arm that was holding the guy. As I passed my right ‘arm’ cut the thing causing it to drop the guy, I couldn’t see if he landed safely. As I came around its shoulder it was grabbing for me franticly, I landed on its right shoulder and slashed at its left hand as it reached for me.

“Damn it, I’m almost out of stamina,” I heard the voice say, “I’ve got to end this quickly.”

‘I’ thrusted my arm blade… thing into its neck just as it pulled its hand back. It cried out in pain and shook me off its shoulder. I rolled as I landed and looked back up at it, and boy was it pissed. It raised its foot and tried to flatten me. I rolled to the side, damn I wish I was that cool normally, and stabbed its foot. It yelped before finally giving up and running off.

“Heh, that’ll teach ya,” I heard myself say.

“Hey,” the guy from before walked up to me, “thanks for saving my life.”

“I only attacked it first because it was a bigger threat,” I heard him think.

“No, you’re no going to…” I thought.

“Why not?” it responded.

The man had gone over to his jeep and was inspecting the damage, ‘I’ walked slowly towards him.

“No, I won’t let you!” My body froze.

“Damn you still have some control; well we’ll see how long that lasts.”

“I’ll ask again who are you?”

“Call me Drake, and damn your body’s weak”

We blacked out.
©2007-2009 ~Iakos
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Part 3, I don't know about this one, had some trouble making it make sence. Felarya, and the scarlet elf belong to :iconkarbo:.
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man this was confusing for a minute! You did a good job though!

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My Manga army grows with everything I see... :yakuza::yakuza::yakuza:
That was a bit confusing at first but this is an interesting turn of event ^_^
I really loved how they were able to travel to one shadow to another. this is a neat ability :D

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